This Songwriting Mistake is Easy to Avoid, If…


Hey Reader,

It's Keppie here!

There’s a storytelling mistake that shows up in songs all the time.

And it has nothing to do with rhyme schemes or chord choices.

It’s this:

We bury the most interesting idea.

This came up inside one of our live feedback sessions this week — the real, live, slightly messy, beautifully human kind where we can actually move sections around and hear the difference instantly.

A songwriter had written a strong verse with a compelling image buried halfway through:

“He had fame in his head
For a song he can no longer sing.”

It was evocative. Memorable. Concept-rich.

But it was sitting in the middle of the verse, surrounded by lines that were more functional — setting context, explaining the situation.

And here’s the thing about listeners:

We don’t process songs linearly in the same way we read an essay. Certain positions in a song carry disproportionate weight....READ FULL ARTICLE HERE.

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